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    dots Submission Name: Tuesdaydots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 49/52/37
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsTuesdaydots
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    Ok I know I acted stupid.
    
I still can’t find out why.
    
I miss my first hit by cupid, 
    
And the look in your eyes.
    
Something is pulling us apart.
    
Something I want to stop
    
Feeling the fear in my heart,
    
From the bottom to the top.
    
But that is not all I feel
    
In my heart for you.
    
There are emotions that I know are real,
    
Emotions I know are true.




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 08:18:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was rather cliché that i wouldn't be surprised to hear from a forth grader.
    Tuesday?
    the name of the girl?
    day of the week?
    i'm confused.
    c'mon man, you can do better.
    i've read your stuff before.
    Peace<3


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    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]



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