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    Author: to-wit
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    i promise to you its true ,i died on tuesady,three years ago and im coming back large,found a whole darker than shark meat and treated myself to gourging on thoughts .i found out how eveil i am and that it passes the test as well.thrown into a poltergeist hole,the C.I.A. dont know what to do with me,proven to be true through screens,changing names is innocent.this life has beeen over for me for three years and i cant find the hole again to leave.piss and terror,where?share an oath from god.my smart remark.shark bait,it aint it,lit fourteen of em in my life and made just cause my wife.type.type angry and feign an attempt.limp bizkits in the cemetary say they are there and want god to know it.show it.prove it.prove your love.dove,cakewalk for an instant,accept the possibility,or silk screen it.it was without doubt the darkest hole the world had ever known and sensing that life had come a calling in some form,i resent to tell,the left moved and groved over the innocent,please.we tease em,thats what i heard.an envious voice with choice matter.dad on platter,heard that too,knew,knew then i was dead and in a hole with no growth potential.seeing i died,i cried none and yelled for god to show himself,and he did,without question did he,for he rent up and jerried a loose goose and truced none with the devil for we defeated him on that very day.laid him out without remorse and seen the blimp in his eye.there is a neclace for me when i get back for doing what i did,even kept it.like i said,i was dead and learning,piece of me wanted out and shout to the earth,a real psychic is coming,for it was what i asked for in return for what i did and what i received.being me,i wanted the eveil side,and got both barrels.i routinely see and speak to jack the ripper,blackbeard and jimmy hoffa,pencil in the ghost team,for the worst,besides myself,is a man named curtiss cluss,who died for the confederacy and champed a bit later.still,we love him and he hangs out.he says he dont want it,human communication,but he speaks."see,when we walk we walk,and when we talk we talk."lark,who goes there?potential,me,but,i get thee for free.leave.leave and die.we see why.tried and garnered a romance with the dance step,for girls are everywhere,even the famous,but,they wasnt time and wine works too short,girl retort,love de short,kemp kelly,and belly,dance,my aunts,she will say,hey,i got all day and to-wit dont,so throw it.next thing i know,im back in oh hole with dough rolls of cash,learning the do-rope.a chance to be a rich man and chanc passed by,when the eveil returned and said learn,if will,but learn in stern school,ole aprils fool is all they hold,speaking of heaven,when all i thought was you agree.see,the left dont mean much to me and i jive talk for faulkners sought.bought.bought a lint.there,covered poetry requirement.sent,sent from god to be sod and lod a favor,there gator from here,whos weird and scared.where/there?you gary?sary a navo from shavo said hey-o.no,i dont want money,i need money,i am broke and no holdings,jobs or any,god said it would come and so it shall.anyhow,i was walking for a fourtenight when i cane upon a stick that dicked itself a mirror and said,this is hell,for it was,and i drove the mirror down and swallowed it whole,dont ask why,just did,the def said cursed,the ghosts,they said good.when i talk and walk,i dream of them,but finn from city wants pity cups,ill lup se nup.yep.anyway,day after day did i walk with the dead and they showed me veery head without remorse,said you are our only course and pourous me,left to dent a bender,i got winder cycle,my nichol,or nichol in your generation,penetration.days and nights i scored but now i want no more,for i scored.i get walk bys from poltergeists and ghouls,all kinds,mosters abound,even sound the horn for god,works that way,see,they bleed for free,even knee.when i walk with them,they den out and pout,wow,what a solution,provin to be true,a waste of you.i do i do.ask john edward if he do,on record,type it here john,who comes here and reads my stuff from time to time.he wont.he wont say it in court or on court papers,i will,besides,do a silk screen test on my words,thats what the C.I.A does,and they pave the way.say,i,was walkin and talkin with god when sod popped up and left,it didnt die,it just walked off,and lo and behold,i knolled out,i give,i thought,but didnt.not my original thought i spoke,so somebody must have entered the yope,for i elope,bo.so i die,even vie for it,wheres my spot.i want to go back to what i got,alot.i even venture a guess,messed on you,i got blue and red,extra dead,see,walt aint a criminal,just a vermin,left to cause his own rot,see/all i got i want him,out here with me,but,he wont meet,so i go to him.there is death everywhere,and share it with brothers,it gets you there faster.disaster struck on my truck,not how i died,but i lied to get out and it works,lying,when heavens trying to kill you too,even a few ghosts,not many,but a few.i swore i would chase them to the end,even found one,but,no man can stand it.i wound up and pitched the ball,killed em all and god came callin,for the fallin he would say,all day.god loves ghosts and eveil people like me,the same as them in heaven.anyway,we spoke for a while and he said beyourself,dont dilly dally and dont work hard,its not for what you think.link,he wnats you home,in heaven,where theres a better deal.no jesus,no saint,just marshall law,thats all.thats why i prefer the company of graveyards to the almighty heaven,no law out there,even empty of them,most graveyards dont carry dead,only magnafield ones,which we have here,not north of pantry line,I.E.,ther mason dixon,but here,in good ole fernandina beach,we see.i did it,i sure did and lower me in again,i want more,gore out a thought and bought the store,i own it,i own it for what i did.next,i spoke with mark the angel and he said he loved me,which he do,said he has since birth,always has,always will.be still,he told me and i giggled,which was to show me that stuff didnt work.he told me to tell the earth not to follow him,it wouldnt work,although the pull to follow is greta,he added with a smirk.i saw the devil,from a distance,not the same as you satan,but alike,not built for humans,also,saw red,white and blue for reasons unknown.i think its the time of the united states like you never known.wrong to be it.i saw internal trouble with the chinese,not in the news,but they are biting hard,also saw north korea tell the soul of america that they are a joke and not to worry,no nukes here,none that work anyway.saw russia,for what it was,a beautiful lady,looking for a friend or lover,im game russia,you are much to me.i seen syberia and looked for illegal prisons,which werent any,which proved we are lied to as americans.saw george w bush and bill clinton for what they are,liars and cowards.saw canada as an enemy,which they do.saw the irsih as a stumble,many in the afterlife hate the irsih,goodwell.saw lebenon as aproblem,one we should deal with.saw the iraqi people as just scared of us and wanting to be happy,laughter wise.saw beheaded people on the news and reported it to the news and they said no,you have to buy a spot to be on the news.saw anne rice,sitting at home,listening and reading what i write,which is what she is doing right now,also saw brett favre here,as a mystery player as they are called,asking should he play one more year,not knowing what else to say or ask.i saw the death of the polar bear,for which the canadians are sick of them.also saw jenna,barbara and chelsie for what they are,sweet and married to my idea.seen the news for what its worth,nothing,some charade of jennifer anniston and brad pitt being married,it never happened,what a lie.i seen we get different news down here in the south anywhere else in the country and i seen rain,weird rain,which is coming,always check the rain from here on out and youll see it.i also seen the day,the left coast scare caused by google,coming,also seen fear in the eyes of the minute men,coming,for they no not the queens demise,even day of.sen whats coming,left of terror,there are more attacks planned on peanut butter,this time,jiffy brings em in,youll see.the Em,or arab are behind it with irish support.and i seen an attack on england coming and its up north,trying to destablize our country through rock profits,very few know what that is,but two are here,you steve and anne rice,who need to speak,pumpkins be damned.lastly,i seen you,whoever you are,and ill find the source,of course,and ill amke the news,true,but i wont go to jail for lesser charges,even dropped charges.we see the light.




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