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    dots Submission Name: My life is Complex...dots

    Author: ?THE TRUTH?
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       jus some real life expressions from a few years back

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    dotsMy life is Complex...dots

    Life’s a bitch right now so I gotta write.
    Sittin up at night,
    stress on my mind. Yo I gotta write,
    Morning is no different, Same shit wit a little light,
    aaah man I gotta write,
    Family is an issue that I thought I could handle,
    God damn I was wrong, so now I gotta write.
    Feeling things not right,
    kind like, how I feel inside.
    Damn yo , just let me write.

    The future looking Grimm, No real hope in sight.
    Just me , I am the one.. shinning armor knight…
    Told you , just let me write..
    Nuttin else to do, but write,
    No other way to turn, So I gotta turn right.
    I gotta turn to the light, the brightest one in sight.
    darkness is something I never really liked
    wich means it was easy for me to turn right

    You on ya own wit this one, No help for the fight,
    Gotta hold ya own, In this Game called Life.
    Gotta get ya shit together, just to survive.
    Take ya priorities and line ‘em up right,
    Line ‘em up tight.
    18 years old , bout to start my own life.
    Never looking back, Only one direction
    You can call me the pipe.
    I told you life’s a bitch,
    Im beatin this shit, so you can call me Ike.

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