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    dots Submission Name: You = Doubtfuldots
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    Author: xgirlxbassistx
    ASL Info:    18/f/CO
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 80/70/34
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1186



    Description:
       Yeah...so this is for my ex bf...who said all of these things to me...well, all the negative stuff.
    He's the one who questioned my intentions, etc. and it made me feel bad because I felt like I was doing something wrong.
    I'm over him.
    Way over him.
    I just found this song today and tweaked it.


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    dotsYou = Doubtfuldots
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    V1:
    What makes you think (that) I never liked you?
    How could you sit (there) and say, "I don't get you?"
    You damage my heart
    and make me feel useless.
    Don't you realize that I think about you all the time
    yet there you go
    questioning my intentions?
    If you never liked what I did in the first place,
    then my bother asking me to be with you?

    Chorus:
    You're so doubful
    You don't know it
    and I hear it
    in your voice.
    Your comments
    they hurt me
    bring myself down
    deep inside.
    So, I hide with-
    in myself
    and learn to face that
    You're so doubtful.

    V2:
    Three little words bring me down
    and you know I can't say it to you.
    You seem like you respect that,
    but in reality, you don't.
    You say that you can trust me;
    flames of jealousy rise out of you.
    Do you realize that I trust you
    and I don't care what you do
    as long as you don't hurt me.
    I'm so crazy about you.

    Chorus




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 13:39:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i rele like it and i find myself able to relate to this song. good job =] keep writing
    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Anz | [ Reply to This ]



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