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    dots Submission Name: preach medots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I pulled his tickling throat down onto my swollen and supple vagina. There he wanked about and slipped his tonsils into a vast ocean of wamr milk and seeds.

    From my nipple there was yeast and fluctuating desires from my priest. I confessed to him that I did love cock/ He then pulled out a tasty morsil.




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 14:51:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




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      "wow." that's really the best of what i've got to say. i don't mind the humor, nor do i mind the defamation of christian magestras, but the self involvement really comes off as trampish.... but, if you truly enjoy the lust that much, have fun
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by DontSaveMySoul | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree it is fairly disturbing but thats what makes it great not really sure if i like it or not yet but its certainly got its own little place in my mind where all the [censored]ed up things go

    tony
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by cartoon autopsy | [ Reply to This ]
      Ewwwww!

    I think this is nasty!
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      This is just wrong, I'm sorry. . . but confessing that to a preacher and them doing that! WRONG! Good write but. . . *shivers* yeh.

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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