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    dots Submission Name: Earthenwaredots
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    Author: crimson echo
    ASL Info:    19 M U.S. of A
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 412/149/55
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1053



    Description:
       Giose's (hopefully) final character theme, doing a spinoff of one of the others. Can you guess which legendary monster spawned my words?


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    dotsEarthenwaredots
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    I.
    The time is coming closer; I must make up my mind.
    Do I give up what I make, or take what I can find?
    Dust off old emotions: here's the human way.
    If I take this cross on high, will my spirit deem to stay?

    Refrain:
    Brought by sound on into a fading night--
    if a kiln calls the same as human souls.
    From the fire, I am dragged into this life--
    Earthenware in the shape of a man made whole.

    II.
    Cast, I'm only hollow; live, I am insane.
    Here's the question that I'll ask: which feels the lesser pain?
    Add a sense of wonder, or a sense of pride--
    Neither seems to fill the space; I'll just let you decide.

    Refrain:
    Brought by sound on into a fading night--
    if a kiln calls the same as human souls.
    From the fire, I am dragged into this life--
    Earthenware in the shape of man made whole.




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 18:03:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I have to agree, cool lyrics and i'm a little uncirten what type of music would go to this, but i'm sure it would sound cool.

    V.G. Komoscov
    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Jose Ragnos | [ Reply to This ]
      o.O going to leave a short comment. Give me a tune on this and seriously I'm going to record it and pack it off to you. Awesome lyrics.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]



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