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Earthenware


Author: crimson echo
ASL Info:    21 M U.S. of A
Elite Ratio:    8 - 412 /150 /55
Words: 164
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Description:


Giose's (hopefully) final character theme, doing a spinoff of one of the others. Can you guess which legendary monster spawned my words?


Earthenware



I.
The time is coming closer; I must make up my mind.
Do I give up what I make, or take what I can find?
Dust off old emotions: here's the human way.
If I take this cross on high, will my spirit deem to stay?

Refrain:
Brought by sound on into a fading night--
if a kiln calls the same as human souls.
From the fire, I am dragged into this life--
Earthenware in the shape of a man made whole.

II.
Cast, I'm only hollow; live, I am insane.
Here's the question that I'll ask: which feels the lesser pain?
Add a sense of wonder, or a sense of pride--
Neither seems to fill the space; I'll just let you decide.

Refrain:
Brought by sound on into a fading night--
if a kiln calls the same as human souls.
From the fire, I am dragged into this life--
Earthenware in the shape of man made whole.




Submitted on 2007-03-07 18:03:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I have to agree, cool lyrics and i'm a little uncirten what type of music would go to this, but i'm sure it would sound cool.

V.G. Komoscov
| Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Jose Ragnos | [ Reply to This ]
  o.O going to leave a short comment. Give me a tune on this and seriously I'm going to record it and pack it off to you. Awesome lyrics.
Cheers
Azuire
| Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]


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