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    dots Submission Name: fuck em'dots
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    Author: kLaDeeDa
    ASL Info:    14 f
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 82/114/47
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1060
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 550



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    dotsfuck em'dots
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    its not about letting go of the pulse
    or giving up on it all
    NO ONE is that powerful

    FUCK EM'

    Dont let anyone dictate your thoughts
    and dont sit on a pity pot

    You know just what u got

    GIVE IT TO EM"

    show how stong you can be
    head on to any mother fucker who tells you differently

    FUCK EM'

    your strength is in you soul
    and you cant let it go

    FUCK EM'


    -F




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 22:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love your attitute and view on this piece but that one part, "head on to any mother [censored]er who tells you differently" i thing it almost seems too long for your poem other than that its wonderful
    -crazymunchkin
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by crazymunchkin | [ Reply to This ]


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