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    dots Submission Name: Jealousydots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 937
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 618



    Description:
       Yeah yeah for all you people out there that think that poetry has to be rhyming you can do something with that that I"m not going to say. I wrote this though because well, it's true and anyone who has been jealous and in love knows that.


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    dotsJealousydots
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    I'm a very powerful emotion.
    I can turn huge cities
    into ruins.
    I can burn bridges
    between family members.
    I can even make the best of friends
    become the worst of enemies.
    I travel all around the world.
    I'm not racist,
    I love to be around everyone.
    I go where ever
    my bestfriend Love goes.
    We are always with eachother.
    You dont get one of us
    without the other.
    We can make or take
    peoples lives.
    My hobby is to take
    & destroy everything I can.
    My name,
    Jealousy.




    Submitted on 2007-03-08 09:22:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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