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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 706
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 661



    Description:
       Again, just like in my other poem 'Jealousy' poems don't have to rhyme. I wrote this about my now ex-boyfriend but we were together at the time.


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    You shouldn't keep secrets
    from the ones you love.
    If you truely love someone,
    tell them.
    Don't hold it in
    or you might never get to
    tell them just how you feel.
    Anounce your love publicly
    if you want
    or in private.
    You never know
    what tomorrow might bring
    so tell and show
    that person just how you feel.
    Don't hold anything back.
    Love them with all your heart
    and tell them
    and show them
    that you do everyday.
    Hold them,
    kiss them,
    hug them,
    but most of all
    tell them you love them.




    Submitted on 2007-03-08 09:27:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      9/10 of my poems don't rhyme, so I'm on board with the "poems don't have to rhyme" issue.

    I think this was sweet and sincere. I agree that if you love someone you should shout it from the roof tops because if you don't tell the person, you could regret it.
    I've been with my fiance for over 3 years and every day we say we love each other at least three times. It's silly but I just need to make sure he still knows, because I do love him so much.

    I don't think this was meant to be a complex poem, nor was it meant to win "poem of the year" but it was sweet and an enjoyable read.

    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by SilverScent | [ Reply to This ]


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