Description: It's been 7 months since my last submission. Not that I stopped writing, I just had a lot of things on my mind.
About the poem, most people found it confusing, so the title is obvious.
You don't have to understand it, just enjoy.
I've written things more confusing, believe me!
The overall feeling it gave me (personally) is "you" is either society or an actual person.
The narrative character has forgotten, or lost who he/she is, and with it he/she is forgetting what life is about. The whole world or (other person) seems to know everything about what they want in life; it seems their life is perfect.
That's my interpretation anyway. I'm sure it's different to the one you had as the writer. But that's the great thing about writing in this style. Each person can take what relates most closely to them. I tend to use the "vague" approach and 8/10 comments are about how they're not understood. But how I see it is, the poet shouldn't have to give it to the reader on a plate. A good reader will use their imagination when reading and interpret it in their own way. Just like what I did with yours, but that's partly because I know what to do with a write like this... If a reader isn't prepared to have an open mind with the write, then they don't deserve to understand it.
I very much enjoyed this write though.
Don't let people not understanding it put you off. Just keep writing. And I hope my long comment hasn't sent you to sleep...
Submission Name: Confusing
