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    dots Submission Name: Eulogydots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEulogydots
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    It was that fresh men year,
    Front page news,
    Everyone wonders why Bart,
    Was huming the blues,
    No body really knows him,
    Or remembers his name,
    All anybody knew,
    Is he never seemed sane,
    So in cruelty he,
    Early wrote his Eulogy,
    And chose it's fuel to be,
    Everything,
    He came to school to be,
    And feudally, this munity,
    Makes him insane,
    Because nobody,
    Knows him, or recognizes his pain,
    Rejoices in his sunshine,
    Sympathizes with his rain,
    Or Clears out the cloud,
    The drop water on his pane,




    Submitted on 2007-03-08 10:00:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, thats really good!!! i cant really say anything i would change! very very good!
    :D
    Jessica
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, thats really good!!! i cant really say anything i would change! very very good!
    :D
    Jessica
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      that's sad but very good! I liked it!
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]


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