oh phillip phillip phillip... i always did like this poem... i thought the title was a little weak though. but i guess i can't complain. i mean, you did ask for my help on it.
oh i feel so evil. creating another profile like this just to mock you. oh well. we go back a long way so i guess there's not too much harm in it. i may write to you from my other file one day, but we'll just have to see. have a good one and i'll see you thursday!
Nice rhyme scheme with the third line rhyming with the next third line. It gave it a certain edge. The poem overall was good and its easy to tell that you have a knack for rhyming poetry. Or you may have spent sleepless nights waiting for these rhymes to come to you.
Ha.
I doubt it though.
Gotta give you some credit.
This was nicely done, I expect more from you soon.
Submission Name: The Bloodstained Requiem
