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    dots Submission Name: Fallen Dreamersdots
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    Author: only_a_dreamX
    ASL Info:    18/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 81/69/52
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 875



    Description:
       certain lines have been (obviously) inspired by "catch a falling star" but definately have different meaning. the last line is from disney's cinderella.


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    Catch the falling daydreams
    Store them in your heart,
    Save them for a rainy night.
    Recollect the fairy tales,
    Release the shame that haunts,
    Forget all that you’ve seen, you’ve heard.
    Close your tired eyes,
    Softly drift away,
    Rest on clouds of purity.
    Catch the falling daydreams,
    Store them in your heart,
    Perhaps this time they’ll even stay.
    Catch the fallen daydreams,
    Store them in your heart,
    It’s all that you will ever need.
    With realities so fickle
    Your dreams may soon be real,
    First hopelessness, then clarity.
    It’s hard to sleep in darkness
    So come back to the light,
    Take my hand and walk with me.
    Catch the falling daydreams,
    Wear them on your sleeve,
    The dreams that you wish could come true.




    Submitted on 2007-03-08 12:31:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this poem, i love how it doesnt rhyme, but yet you conveyed a certain message through out the entire poem. and it really reminds me of disney, which is my favorite thing ever lol even tho i am 18 :)
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      So well and ably done .... you have achieved a wonderful staccotto cadence with these lines ... it is a lovely and highly evocative poem, really quite excellent ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for commenting on "I Know". I really like this, especially how it doesn't rhyme. I know that may sound weird, but I sometimes find it hard to write poetry with a rhyme scheme. This was beautifully written, and I look forward to reading more of your work

    Bill
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by BigRed | [ Reply to This ]
      ....and i know one day they will. Very organized piece you had here. i loved it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]



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