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    dots Submission Name: An Ongoing Mistakedots
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    Author: Futurous
    ASL Info:    15/Male/UK
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 8/0/2
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsAn Ongoing Mistakedots
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    An Ongoing Mistake



    There is a low rumble inside my ears,
    That no other human has heard.
    The taunting alibie that follows my steps,
    Is merely a mask that covers the icy depths.

    The slow swaying of branches surround my thoughts;
    They have bore witness to my selfish soughts.
    The deception of Autumn; the silence of Winter,
    And now this Spring sticks like a splinter.

    That beauty I have betrayed will live with me, on,
    As I battle this irony, which my breath has become.
    This is merely a subtle ending to a screaming pain,
    For I know my words of affection are all in vain.

    Would I ever repeat this beautifully wretched mistake,
    Or will my senses bring forth my eye's wake?
    Did I ever do any wrong in pursuing this dream;
    I say this now: Love isn't all that it seems.


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