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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 593
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1118



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       I know that it's probably really outta wack, but i jus typed what came to my mind...


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    You made me cry last night
    3 months worth the pain
    Just started to flow out
    I don't understand how
    Or even why
    All I know
    Is that I really needed you by my side
    I'm sorry that i've hurt you
    And I can't undo the crazy shit that I've done
    All that I want you to know
    Is that I still love you so
    Please give me one more chance
    I swear that I won't do it again
    When I say those three words
    I say it without a fear
    I'll make things right
    Just promise that you'll never leave my side
    No matter how bad it may seem
    I'll always let you be free
    What really hurts though
    Is the fact that I found out that you lied
    And that's another reason
    Why I made sure that you knew
    That you're the reason why I'm hurting so
    And why I can't control
    All the tears that I shed for you
    Every single night
    And the tears that I'll always shed for you
    Until the day that I die...




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