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    dots Submission Name: A PRAYER FOR A TRUE LOVEdots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1579
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 2273



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       This was the scend poem that i wrote, It also was to a special lady


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    dotsA PRAYER FOR A TRUE LOVEdots
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    A PRAYER FOR A TRUE LOVE







    AS I LAY ME DOWN AT NIGHT,


    I ASK THE LORD TO BE MY SIGHT;


    I HOPE TO HAVE A DREAM,


    ENJOYING A BEAUTIFUL DAY BY A STREAM;


    FALLING IN LOVE LIKE A DOVE,


    FLYING IN THE HEAVENS ABOVE;


    HOLDING YOUR HAND,


    PLAYING IN THE SAND;


    RUNNING IN THE GRASS,


    JUST HAVING A BLAST;


    I LOOK DEEP IN YOUR EYES,


    THEY SHINE LIKE THE STARS IN THE SKY;


    I CAN HEAR YOU SINGING,


    AS THE LORD GIVES THE WORDS GREAT MEANING;


    I KNOW THAT I AM SAFE FROM HARM,


    AS YOU HOLD ME IN YOUR LOVING ARMS;


    YOU HAVE SO MUCH LOVE IN YOUR HEART,


    I COULD TELL FROM THE VERY START;


    YOU COULD BE MINE,


    AT JUST THE RIGHT TIME;


    YOUR LIKE AN ANGEL FROM ABOVE,


    CREATED FROM GOD`S GREAT LOVE;


    SO I PRAY THIS PRAYER.


    AS I ASK THE LORD TO SEND A TRUE LOVE LIKE YOU;


    AND HOPE SOMEDAY MY DREAMS COME TRUE.




    WRITEN BY: WILLIAM D THOMPSON JR




    Submitted on 2007-03-08 15:54:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this poem is really sweet. i love all the words u used.

    i do like this one alot..(=



    peace
    Grim Aylin

    | Posted on 2007-08-19 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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