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    dots Submission Name: Baby Please Dont Godots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 391
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    Description:
       my bf has had enough of life completly and wants to get away from it all
    but to do that he has to walk out on me aswell.. thatz what this poem is about


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    dotsBaby Please Dont Godots
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    tell me whats going on
    i dont understand
    this isnt going to happen
    its not what i planned
    all of a sudden
    your walking out the door
    throwing our relationship in the dirt
    expecting me not to hurt
    you know how much i love you
    what am i supposed to do
    i cant let you walk out
    without a word to say
    i havent done anything wrong
    so why must i suffer
    baby please dont do this to me
    im sorry im sorry but please
    i know its not my fault
    but why me
    your everything to me
    you make me complete
    i cant loose you this way
    not like this
    i know you love me
    that cant be denied
    but what you about to do
    is fucking with my mind
    just because of her
    your gonna fuck it up
    i thought we had something
    i thought that we would last
    you dont have to cheat on me
    to break my heart
    walking out of the door
    is a pretty good start
    im sitting her crying
    trying to be brave
    your laying there staring
    with not a word to say
    i only have one thing to say
    baby please dont go




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 05:24:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      oh. well, i can relate to his very well. i recently went through problems like this with my boyfriend. i feel your pain. kudos.

    `AdrienneCale
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by AdrienneCale | [ Reply to This ]


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