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    dots Submission Name: Angel In Disguisedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 555
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 439



    Description:
       My Bf James AKA BrokenByLove Wrote This For Me
    I Love you Baby


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    dotsAngel In Disguisedots
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    you wrapped me up in your arms
    made me feel at peace and warm
    you are special to me and are everything i need
    theres no-one like you
    your an angel, an angel in disguise
    keeping your secret showing me love
    fixed my aches and pains
    saved my life, i was seconds from the end
    a new is just around the bend
    i can spend it with you
    i thank you my angel in disguise




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 05:27:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very cute concept. it makes me feel like every one has a guardian angel and you found yours. or at least the character in this piece did. the only thing i can say is add detail. if i wrote it i would have made it flow a little more, but its still really good. keep up the awesome work.
    - jessica
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      aww. how sweet. the concept is very nice. may i suggest you put in a bit more detail?

    `AdrienneCale
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by AdrienneCale | [ Reply to This ]


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