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    dots Submission Name: You Are My Everythingdots
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    Author: bubble_popper15
    ASL Info:    17, f, in his arms
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 141/101/32
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 124
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 547



    Description:
       I wrote this for the person that means the world to me.


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    dotsYou Are My Everythingdots
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    I think about you all the time
    (you are my everything)

    I think about you day and night
    (you are my everything)

    I wanna make things right
    (you are my everything)

    I know you must love me
    (you are my everything)

    I know the love inside you is for me
    (you are my everything)

    You might not know this but you are my everything, I couldn't live without you in my life, I need you more than ever right now, you are my everything. I love you.




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 08:47:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you know, if you can honestly say "I can't live without you in my life.." then you should try to change that. It's quite common, but also quite unhealthy to revolve one's whole world around a single person. I'm guilty of it, even now. If that one person were to die, I would be extremely miserable for a long time. My world would stop. In reality, she could die, especially bc she's over here in Iraq with me. I think it wise to learn how to live without someone....even if you don't have to. That way you are always prepared, or atleast more prepared, to lose them.

    SAM

    Good Lord, I sound like a 40 year old....
    | Posted on 2007-05-05 00:00:00 | by Samuel Bielz | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice and special. Doesn't feel too original to me BUT if that is how you feel it must be good to get it out
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by BrokenStream | [ Reply to This ]
      short and to the point.... i like how every second line in each little stanza is "you are my everything"... in my opinion, quite original and really good, keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by rapius | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it!!! GReat job ANgel!!!! Really!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by Granger | [ Reply to This ]


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