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    dots Submission Name: Mothers Die...Children Crydots
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    Author: Granger
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 13/28/23
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 385
    Average Vote:    4.6667
    Bytes: 390



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    dotsMothers Die...Children Crydots
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    When mothers die
    Children cry
    It's not by the way they were taken
    It's by how they were mistakin'
    Death is at each door
    Gathering souls on each floor
    When mothers die
    Children cry
    Their sorrows are built
    Even with their own guilt.
    Wishing that they can change the past
    That way life can still last.




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 08:59:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it, it reminds me of a couple years ago when my dad and my grandma died. I would do anything to turn back time.
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      really good job! it has a lot of emotion...it makes me want to go walk...and it's 2:30 in the morning! i think i shall. good job!

    -Jake
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by Frivilous _ | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really good poem, makes me think of when my mom died and how I still feel about it today... keep up the great work!
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Morrtigan | [ Reply to This ]
      I really think you have alot of feeling put into this-a good thing. Keep it up!

    ~orange
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good, keep it up...

    SuicidalDrug,
    Lacee
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by SuicidalDrug | [ Reply to This ]



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