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Author:	jackz
ASL Info:	18/F/Oh
Elite Ratio:	3.84 - 295/221/111
Words:	128

Class/Type:	Rant/Depressed
Total Views:	197
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	850

Description:
uhh... little do they know. The pain I live with... the pain I have been ignoring...

This Life I live... dots

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Look into my eyes
May I ask
What do you see?

Do you see
What others ignore?

Or can you see
What they pretend to not see

Do these hazle eyes
Tell you a story

Not even I could tell!

And yet I've lived
The story my eyes decribe to you

The darkness seeps in
And the story begins

With me, a young naive innocent girl

This story...
Life...

Soon ends with a young women
Strung out on drugs..

With a lose of innocence...
No longer that young naive little girl

Whom was once decribed to you..

There's not much to it
Take a look into these eyes..

Then you'll know it all!

Submitted on 2007-03-09 09:52:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  Your eyes must say a lot about you, lol. Hey, my eyes are hazel! But I aint a girl =p
| Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow. Do I love those eyes! Baby, you have changed my world in ways you may never know. Thank you so much for everything that makes you who you are. This is the poem that I picked to add to my favorite list. It is about something very dear to me. Your eyes, and the story that they tell. I love you "poo eyes"!

-Dave
| Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Wired | [ Reply to This ]
   thats a great poem . ive known a lot of people like that and i was/am like that too. i turned to drugs....BIG mistake... but its just the choice some people make. anyway great peom keep it up!!!
| Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by crazyinsane | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem describes so many people i know...it could easily have described me last year but i guess things have changed a lot. i really like it a lot.
| Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]

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