Description: This I wrote one night while I was gazing at the moon. I don't understand HOW it inspired this, but oh well. It's like, the second poem I ever wrote, but I still like it, despite its slight flaws. Another amusing fact about it I didn't originally write it on paper, rather I texted it to my own cell phone as I came up with its stanza.
Great peice, especially since this is the second poem you've ever written. Not to mention also that you was texting this, not actually writing it.
Anyway, I like your word usage in this poem. You used them well and fit more descriptive words into the rhyme instead of simple childish words. Also, there's a lot of emotional value it seems in this poem. The speaker seems to be in love with someone, but they're out of reach, well with another person. That's classic . I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this.
If this is about you, I wish you the best of luck. I've had problems like that in the past, and I hope I don't have any more, which I probably will. It can turn into a quite heart breaking ordeal....Good write, and keep up the good work.