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    dots Submission Name: HELL IS ALL WE'LL EVER KNOWdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    19/M/Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 79/226/142
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHELL IS ALL WE'LL EVER KNOWdots
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    "i won a medal this afternoon..."

    revenge never goes out of style
    so much will have suffered to be justified
    honor and glory what a tempting choice
    conformists wearing camoflauge colours
    insignia impressed into their eyes

    theres no refuge here
    just maroonish-grey puddles of dirt and blood
    staining my flesh the colours of my insides
    just another piece of shit in the storm
    waiting to drift out the eye, the menace

    return with a smile on your face
    know that youve done well
    inspire and lust with self loathing
    take pride in all your attire
    although its made of the flesh of your enemies

    "i won a medal this afternoon, and all i had to do was kill 100 people"
    just another piece of shit




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 14:46:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As depressing as this poem truly is, I truly enjoyed it. I can see it, really see it, the bloody dirt, and a soldier accepting a medal for killing, and hating himself when everyone else is so proud.
    I wonder, what made you write this?
    Keep writing.
    Heather
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by Rhayne O_Reilly | [ Reply to This ]
      I've never had to kill, so I wouldn't know.

    The ideology of war... it's funny isn't it.

    I like this.
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by blacknails | [ Reply to This ]



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