Great poem, you are an amazing writer and it's good to find someone who knows what the monster inside all of us is like. Like how do we tame it? Can it be tamed? No it can't but it can be leashed, but it must be faced and beaten, so our evil sides can be oversome, but it is ard so let us both wish the other blessings in doing so, in facing our evil sides and may God give us the strength to defeat them. Now I am not preaching you and I do not really want ot offend you with my faith but it is part of who i am. So I can't apologze for believing it but I can if it is too harsh.
You show alot of yourself in this. i don't know you that well, but this still moves me. I would like to make sort of a spin off this poem would that be okay if i could quote the whole "my soul is starving, but my heart is bullimic" type thing, i like that line it has a ring to me. I hope you feel you can feel better after awhile.
i loved this for the sickest reasons which i wont disclose to you because you are a stranger.. har har. but the important thing is that i loved it.. or thats whats important to me. perhaps not to you since you dont know me so why should it matter? but if it does then im glad and if not oh well.
I really like this poem. The very first section is my favourite. i love how you've used bulimia to describe how you feel about your heart. it works very well. I also really like the play on words, with bitter and better. there is a lot of emotion in this piece, well done. You seem really good at reaching into yourself and finding something in the form of words. that is very hard to do.