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    dots Submission Name: We Are All Dirtydots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWe Are All Dirtydots
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    Ride the wind through your hair,
    Press against a face
    Proud and worn,
    Eyes that stare
    With consuming grace
    Of flammable loins.

    Your hair smells of sweet
    And dishonorable things
    You have pride
    But not when it comes to me,
    Your hips rise above
    With silky pelvic wings
    You can't hide
    Behind all the joyful screams.

    Lick your moist skin
    Salty, underneath still sweet
    You had died
    Shedding off your former lovers,
    I stare up at you and grin
    Your eyes are closed breathing the heat
    An outburst cried
    The motion fires off the sheets.

    We are all dirty
    But love always is
    When the weak are sturdy
    As two soul mingle,
    Time when emotions crash in
    Good and Evil, the same.
    In the darkness glows passion.




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 17:56:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I appreciated the raw scourge of teenage sex. It'd be nice to strike a balance of virginwhitesheets and stainedsin[censored], but I like what you've done, especially these lines: We are all dirty
    But love always is
    When the weak are sturdy.

    Word.

    melora
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by Melora | [ Reply to This ]


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