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    dots Submission Name: There is a HELLdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
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    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
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       i don't know really it's rough idea on what i think on the view of religion..so yea


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    Is there a Heaven
    Is there a Hell

    I'm not sure..
    But i can tell u one thing
    Hell is for real....

    Death is the Greatest gift of all...
    Now u thinking im suicidal,
    Not at all....

    Now it's time to tell u my theory...

    Heaven is a great thought and all
    but people are scared to go to hell,
    So you pray and pray
    You wonder why god doesn't even ansewer your prayers
    We are all satin SPAWNS,
    Every one has sined at least once in there life and that being nice....

    Think about it
    Why would god create such monsters.
    If he was to be so HOLY,
    The devils really created us
    this is why we act like this,
    open your eyes you are living in hell,
    People killing People for MONEY, DRUGS, and even for a few miles of land.

    It's so hard these day to get a real helping hand




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      think of this. if god made everything. he also made satan. satan is called the root of all evil. but satan was made by god. so god is the root of all evil.
    | Posted on 2007-03-11 00:00:00 | by DBC | [ Reply to This ]
      you have struck on truths here,
    Saitan is god of this earth we are his thoughts spawned to fruition, the devil cannot create we were his gift from god, but the ideology of saitan meant we were bound to sin"gravity" and death to keep us alive we needed the life circle so female were made from "Adam's rib" not out of nothing but there is another nature on earth but it is harder to ascertain.

    nice write..
    Matt
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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