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    dots Submission Name: Epiknosis ~ Understandingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 950
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       "If we live by the Spirit, let us also be directed by the Spirit..." Galatians 5 v. 25



    No work available for me today yet I cannot be discouraged for I am alive in Love and Truth. I will uplift myself and others and carry with me a song to strengthen me...Faith that All is truly Well!!!



    Love, Peace, Joy to all my fellow Elitists!!! Perservere!


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    dotsEpiknosis ~ Understandingdots
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    Today I humbly present myself to Creation. Arise before the dawn and witness the Son and Moon eclips of other as hemispheres are exchanged. To achieve this symbolic steadfastness divinely inherent in All; employed only in devotion; Sunrise and Sunset remain timelessly same yet ever-more glorious.
    Eyewitness to His Majesty by gracious gift Faith; I do not seek yet am found. No future's uncertain for all is illuminated of "promise made tis promise kept." Ebb of breath but one flow of Life. For this present bestowed freely; let our hearts offer equally as gracious thanks in presenting this gift to others along our path; a bounty of treasure with no end to its multitudes.
    Have courage this special day and employ your freedoms to embrace the bonds of the wordly with Love. Fear not for the smile and truth in spirit and soul will uplift and overcome. The demon burden now butterfly, shed of oppressive cocoon, released to flight, imprisioned no more as Mahomet said, "Paradise is under the shadow of swords."





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      i thought this was very pretty, the way it was wrote or written or whatever was very pleasant sounding! you have a very strong belief system going on there! more power to you, i am kinda christian but i only attend church every once and a whil, i do believe in God and thast stuff ya know but i dont reall know all that bibley stuuf and if i didnt know that you wrote this i would have thought it came out of the bible or something ya know????


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    | Posted on 2004-06-09 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      this is beautiful...so complex..ill have to read it quite a few more times before i really get everything out of it, but i can see that your faith is steadfast and you love the Lord very much... thats wonderful and i always love when someone expresses that in their writing... i guess i just feel like he deserves it..after all our talents are a gift from him arent they?
    | Posted on 2004-06-09 00:00:00 | by mandyshay07 | [ Reply to This ]


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