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    dots Submission Name: I am happy.dots
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    Author: UnderlinedInRed
    ASL Info:    18/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 196/262/123
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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       yeah its hard to write when I am happy. So i figured why not capture this happiness while I can, even if it isnt so eloquently written.


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    dotsI am happy.dots
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    I'm amazed.
    At this feeling,
    soaring through my every limb.
    Its hard to tell where I'm standing.
    Because I feel every inch of me,
    Ten feet off the ground.
    I don't know how this happened,
    not even sure if it will ever end.
    But I hope it doesnt.
    Because I never want to hit the floor again.
    Seems like life just keeps improving,
    nothing can shoot me down.
    No matter where I am,
    theres potential in mind.
    It doesnt matter anymore,
    whether I continue to soar,
    All that matters is that now,
    above all,
    I have hope for the future.




    Submitted on 2007-03-09 23:41:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      SEE! Everything is going to be fine, my dear. Sometimes you feel like nothing can bring you down, and others you absolutly want to curl up and die.
    But like I said in your other comment box...
    Even though some days you might not think so...
    Everything WILL work out for the best in the end and you will be happy.
    I promise, once again. :)

    necrotic
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by necrotic | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice poem, I loved it. I've felt that feeling before. Whenever it hits me, I seem to rhyme. A lot. Which increases and prolongs the joyfulness. And the way we seem to fly. In that oh so beautiful sky. Higher than the eagles soar. So high the clouds are now my floor. [Great. I'm doing it again. Will this rhyming never end.] May we all have hope for the future.

    The Bird
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by Swimming Bird | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG this is amazinglingy - not a word but that's how it made me feel. I love reading happy poems and this had a nice flow and just made me feel like I was outside in really warm weather. (random)... Anyways, I love your work.

    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by HurtDeepDown | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha great write! i think you captured how it is when people are indeed happy. That somehow blissful feeling that we are in, as you put it:

    "It doesnt matter anymore,
    whether I continue to soar,
    All that matters is that now,
    above all,
    I have hope for the future."


    Really great write!
    If you have some time, please try and read some of my works.. thx in advance

    - Fallen One
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by Fallen One | [ Reply to This ]
      :) I like this
    it's hard to write something happy, and not many people can pull it off, for some reason it seems to come out in a way that doesn't seem genuine. but you've done well. i don't think it matters that it doesn't have more intellectual or descriptive words, it's simplicity works really well. Keep it up
    Regards, Kalinda
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ]


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