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    dots Submission Name: Till your own soil, Heal your own souldots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTill your own soil, Heal your own souldots
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    A scowl
    merely a growl
    expressed in silence.
    Furrow down
    a frown
    and burrow
    into darkest deeps
    of turmoil.
    Till the soil
    with the purpose
    of an earthworm
    and wiggle
    into unfound
    fears.
    Raise them up
    to the light
    and cry the untapped tears.
    Uncurled energy
    free flows
    once more.

    In the darkest dark
    is the brightest bright.
    Where the light is dark
    and the dark is light.




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