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    dots Submission Name: Now you stay dots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNow you stay dots
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    Now you stay


    So now you stay
    Well I knew you would
    Because Iím not the only
    One here,
    And you donít have to make false
    Conversation
    About things you donít have
    Any interest about

    So now you stay
    And its typical you
    You walk fast along the road
    Because your with me
    Or you hang behind
    Because your with me
    Or you want to be with her

    I donít know anymore
    Whether its me or not
    Or whether your bored
    Or inconsistent
    Or whether I scare you
    But now you stay




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