Description: Who know who this is for....so it's all good
What Would It Be Like To Hold You -------------------------------------------
Tring to think what to write bout dis girl....
thats whats wrong,
im thinking with my head
not my heart..."
So where should I start..
I don't want to rush things
but its eating me inside n out
not knowing what we could of been....
PRETTY then n PRETTY Now
Its amazing your Voice still makes me weak
Somthing never change
I would exchange anything
From my looks to saying fuck the crew
just to see what would of happened between me n you...
Im just tring to stay true...
Unlike your other so called Boo's
I ain't got nothin to lose
From the bottom of my heart is true
I will always stay loyal to you....
I rather have you has a friend,
Then nothin at all........
You know who you are...... If u think im trippin just tell me....
I like it. Its unique, but it makes sense. You have a wonderful writing gift and obviously been through a lot. I really like your writing style. After editing this it could be so much more amazing. Good Job. I look forward to reading more. <3
Sorry - the minute you started with the hip-hop terminology you lost me - not cuz I ain't fly with it, homey, but just cuz it's lazy and clichéd. Why bother when the standard usage of english works so well?
Rap and hip-hop as art-forms in their own right, absolutely.
Rap and hip-hop just thrown into what others write -