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    dots Submission Name: Pressing Onwarddots
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    Author: itsjustme22
    ASL Info:    19/f/CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 237/114/38
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 160
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1026



    Description:
       this is a re-write of 'keep moving'
    its kind of an angsty-write.
    perserverance: everyone needs it.


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    dotsPressing Onwarddots
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    My life has been
    cut into pieces,
    burnt to ashes,
    beaten to near death.

    The scattered remains
    of whats left of me,
    as sharp as glass,
    rest among ashes,
    waiting for their chance to
    penetrate my bare feet.

    I have NO shoes
    and time is running out.

    I need to get past my past.
    I need to cross the path
    I created for myself
    once again.

    Glass shards piercing
    the underbellies of my naked feet,
    embers still glowing amongst the grey.
    Grimacing, I push onward,
    torturing my innocent skin.

    No more regrets.
    No more secrets.

    I close my eyes tight,
    pulling tainted glass
    from my feet;
    the only two things carrying me.

    I am forever lost in a sea of torment and
    until I might somehow find my way,
    I'm still looking for the best way out.

    I'm still walking.




    Submitted on 2007-03-10 23:12:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this alot because i can relate to this and i like the idea of the glass. its realistic which is why i like it too, adding it to my favs.
    | Posted on 2007-03-11 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]



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