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    Author: SuicidalDrug
    ASL Info:    14-f-ks
    Elite Ratio:    1.22 - 3/15/19
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 385
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 542



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    dotsYourdots
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    The stars in your eyes,
    remind me of the world itself,
    so beautiful yet mysterious.

    The smile that slides upon
    your face, to disappear without
    a trace.

    The way you glide upon
    the ground, with all the
    world to be around

    You're beautiful face, that
    never loses might,
    It's such a wonderful sight.

    The voice you have will
    make anyone fall in love,
    because its yours.

    My angel from above.




    Submitted on 2007-03-11 18:03:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, another great poem from you... you are an awesome writer, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-03-11 00:00:00 | by Morrtigan | [ Reply to This ]


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