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    dots Submission Name: Me....dots
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    Author: SuicidalDrug
    ASL Info:    14-f-ks
    Elite Ratio:    1.22 - 3/15/19
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 898
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    dotsMe....dots
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    My hair is
    Brown
    and i am
    down.

    My eyes are
    blue
    and..
    I love you.

    My body is
    thin
    Maybe I'll
    Win.

    My nails are
    Black,
    what do you think of
    that?

    You might think im
    goth
    you might think im all
    emo,

    why is that what you automaticly
    see?
    Can't I just be
    me?

    It's hard enough to live my
    life,
    The only thing left, shall be my
    Knife.....




    Submitted on 2007-03-11 18:29:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Colors are a very beautiful expressions of art. Don't worry if some people don't understand you. That is part of life, judgeing and being misjudged. I really hate to hear when teens are so depressed they feel they need to hurt themselves. I really hope you are not one of them. You writeing is beautiful.
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool Poem!
    You be who you want to be, the hell with what anyone else thinks!
    | Posted on 2007-03-11 00:00:00 | by Morrtigan | [ Reply to This ]


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