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    dots Submission Name: BIRTH,LIFE,DEATH.dots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       i am merely venting i have been numb for so long i wrote the words that came to mind.


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    dotsBIRTH,LIFE,DEATH.dots
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    BIRTH, the begininng of a novel soon to become your life.
    LIFE, the middle of a book that will end with your death.
    DEATH, the end of one chapter in the many chapters that make up the cycle of LIFE.




    Submitted on 2007-03-11 18:41:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      har har.
    this was interesting.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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