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    dots Submission Name: HeadSpacedots
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    Author: GypsyKyree
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/2
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 546
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 837



    Description:
       A headspace trigger. Might be able to guess what it is.


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    dotsHeadSpacedots
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    It's a switch, a button, a lever.
    Snap it on, lock it in place
    Slender neck incased in metal.
    And I change; I kneel
    I am Yours.

    I Trust You
    Trust you not to hurt me
    But to Hurt me
    all the same
    I like it.

    I crave to be controlled.
    Dominated;
    Use me
    Hurt me
    Mark me
    Then Kiss me...

    I don't want a choice.
    I don't want safety.
    I want fear--a tiny bit of fear
    Makes it sweeter.
    Pin me down, trap me
    Make it tingle make it rush.
    Make it hurt.

    I am Yours.
    Prey to your Predator
    Slave to your Mistress

    I am Yours.
    I want it. Want you.
    I Love you. Trust you.




    Submitted on 2007-03-11 18:41:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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