i to seem to be partial to this beacause i can relate so well to it. i like the simplistic nature of the writing in this, it gets to the point and to me the emotion really showed through. good job. i'de also try to re-word this write with a few metaphores or symbology..just to see how the overall feel of it would change..it might be kinda cool. but overall i really liked it.
I like this. Perhaps I am partial to it because I know the situation, or at least part of it, well. I know the pain to never should have happened, so I can relate. I thought you did a pretty good job with the rhyme scheme - maybe not flowy with gorgeous language, but simple and to the point... and it works for this poem. Thank you for sharing. I feel like favoriting this, and I will. :)
This is really good and I feel the exact same way about my ex who I broke up with only a couple weeks ago. I feel like we never should have happened. I like how you started every stanza with "you and I never should..." It makes the poem a lot better.