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    dots Submission Name: Spiritual Turmoildots
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    Author: fabulousAMY
    ASL Info:    21/Female/CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 159/159/61
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 227
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    dotsSpiritual Turmoildots
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    Love's cadence beats slowly,
    The tides sing of sorrow, science, and language.
    A fearful beauty, all consuming, this life, this tide, this ocean.
    I find myself in waves, salt water licking my alabaster skin.
    I am forlorn and lost at sea.
    Grey cancer breeds and science answers with creation.
    A life that will not end, medicine wants us to be as eternal as the ebb and flow.
    Am I fighting a cure, or am I fighting an abomination?




    Submitted on 2007-03-11 22:45:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is pretty beautiful, right here
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Myopic | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very well written. I love the last line. Your imagery is perfect. Very nice job.

    AL
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
      this was very deep.
    it was good.
    i love the ocean.
    i drive up to Oregon and travel the
    coast line during the summer.
    its beautiful there.

    <3 lelian
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Lelian Marie | [ Reply to This ]



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