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    Author: kissmystars
    ASL Info:    20/F/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 4/5/7
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    maybe
    I don't want your ear
    upon my lips-
    a touch wasted.
    I won't seek your visuals
    in explaination of my form.
    Your entrance is not my grace.

    sometimes
    I don't feel your hand
    caress my head-
    tender lost time.
    I can't find a season
    to justify your rhythem.
    Your presence is not my sound.

    often
    I don't need your voice
    on my fingers-
    words quickly thrown.
    I won't long for your breath
    in defining of my art.
    Your being is not my truth.




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 02:26:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahhh this is a great example of independence. I love the short lines, and the last line "You being is not my truth."

    this was a good write. keep writing!
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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