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    dots Submission Name: ban clocksdots
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    Author: kissmystars
    ASL Info:    20/F/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 4/5/7
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsban clocksdots
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    in continuous motion
    i sit here
    bound and waiting
    for time to
    raise the white flag
    surrendering to
    second stealing kisses
    timeless speeches
    and universal truths
    that will not
    age
    fade or
    disappear
    in the moments
    that pass too quickly
    to either be lost
    or held onto-
    rather they are
    forgotten in the
    era of ignorance.

    SAVE HUMANITY - BAN CLOCKS.




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 02:45:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Time...it sucks sometimes, expecially if you have a term paper due tomarrow and it isn't fully finished. The structure of this is a little confusing and slightly hard to follow. In either case, good luck trying to ban clocks; but I warn you, lots of angry college students will go insane. haha

    V.G. Komoscov
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Jose Ragnos | [ Reply to This ]


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