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    dots Submission Name: Love is Hell (revised)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsLove is Hell (revised)dots
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    Love is a war,
    war is Hell.
    A hated darkness,
    a barren prison cell.
    We are trapped in our love,
    prisoners of our hearts.
    Our minds forever bombarded,
    attacked from the start.
    Our emotions rise from nothing,
    they'll murder our souls.
    Our total destruction
    is their ultimate goal.
    Now our bodies lie,
    mere empty shells.
    Without any doubt,
    Love is Hell.




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