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    dots Submission Name: Fill Medots

    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 476
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsFill Medots

    And there goes,
    There goes,
    Wandering here,
    And there,
    For anything else,
    To fill me

    I wanted, I waited,
    Id stand here,
    Wherever youd go,
    I laid there, left faded,
    Left with tears,
    But how would you know?
    Youd always talk,
    About my soul,
    But nothing of control,

    And there goes,
    There goes,
    Wandering here,
    And there,
    For something else,
    To fill me

    I wanted, I waited,
    I followed,
    Wherever youd go,
    You sat there, so patient,
    But tomorrow,
    Youd find away home,
    Youd always talk
    About breaking free,
    But nothing of saving me,

    And there goes,
    There goes,
    Wandering here,
    And there,
    For someone else,
    To fill me

    Submitted on 2007-03-12 09:50:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've come back to this several times, to read it again.
    I can relate, and I think a lot of people can, to the search for something, anything, to fill me.
    Love, sex, food, work, thrills, drugs, booze.
    I read something once that said, "If you're looking for a mate, you're not going to find him in the refrigerator!" lol.
    You make me think about all the things I use to try and fill me. Very nice, my friend.
    | Posted on 2007-11-10 00:00:00 | by amrslamr | [ Reply to This ]

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