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    dots Submission Name: Advicedots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 569
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    dotsAdvicedots
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    Under her wings,
    Just fly,
    Under her guidance,
    Without asking why,
    Just fly abidance,
    Into her loving arms,
    Kept so warm,
    Under the chilled sky,
    Just fly,
    The way she directs you,
    And she will always,
    Protect you,
    And as by her you abide,
    You will in her confide,
    So just fly,
    Into her loving arms,
    Kept for you so warm,
    Under the chilled sky




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 09:54:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is good. you didn't write a description, but i'm going to assume you were talkin about a mom. i have a poem called "my advice". it not at all about this subject, but you should check it out anyway. once again, diggin the write.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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