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    dots Submission Name: Entanglements Of Lifdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Title "Entanglements of Life"


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    dotsEntanglements Of Lifdots
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    I lie, cheat, and steal.
    I cry, seek, and feel.
    Iím over coming my life,
    I search for the knife.
    One that can severe flesh from bone,
    One that will end it all; everyone finally leaving me alone.
    I must stop this hurt,
    I want to sleep within the dirt.
    But first I must regain my lost throne,
    Iím tired of ending up alone.
    I feel my chest cave-in,
    Please stay with me till thee end.
    You have made me stronger,
    I finally want to hold on longer.
    My lies now burned away,
    But itís too late Iíve left you astray.
    I can not afford to lie to you again,
    For you have touched something so hidden and deep within.




    Submitted on 2004-02-01 00:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a good piece. I like the emotion and the feel of this poem. Good twist at the end. Good work.
    | Posted on 2004-02-02 00:00:00 | by Scribner | [ Reply to This ]
      great rhythm on this one, i found myself reading this outloud to be honest,. the twist is also very real to itself and the reality is scary in a way. bloody good one man. fav. selection
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]


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