Description: Well,.........the end of the school year has finally come. There are gonna be so many tears tomorrow. I wrote this for a friend but i wanted to dedicate this to all of my friends that I made this year and are so dear to me. I just wish that I would see them very soon, and that i don't have to wait till the first day of school again.
You made me smile
tha I haven't felt in a while
You understand me so much
that the world understands me so little.
This smile doesn't seem to fade
You came with the first aid
You've been there ever since
You are someone I'm really gonna miss
You're leaving this year
And not coming back
I'll remember everything you taught.
I'll miss you.
Nobody ever cared
as much as you do.
Thank you for being there for me
You know my Best Friend you'll always be
I like where this is coming from. I'm sure the emotions are really heart-felt. Infortunately, I couldn't really connect to what you're saying... maybe if you gave more concrete examples? Also, your use of punctuation was very erratic.