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    dots Submission Name: I Love My Job - the Lost Dr. Suess Poemdots
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    Author: babytinkerbelle
    ASL Info:    26/f/aus
    Elite Ratio:    5.25 - 310/209/42
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       Hehehehe not written by me but I thought it was so funny I had to put it up here


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    dotsI Love My Job - the Lost Dr. Suess Poemdots
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    I love my job, I love the pay!
    I love it more and more each day
    I love my boss, he is the best
    I love his boss and all the rest

    I love my office and its location, I hate to have to go on vacation
    I love my furniture, drab and grey, and piles of paper that grow each day!
    I think my job is really swell, there's nothing else I love so well.
    I love to work among my peers, I love their leers, and jeers, and sneers.
    I love my computer and it's software;
    I hug it often though it wont care. I love each program and every file
    I'd love it more if they worked a while

    I am happy to be here, I am, I am
    I am the happiest slave of the Firm, I am.
    I love this work, I love these chores
    I love the meetings with deadly bores
    I love my job - I'll say it again - I even love those friendly men.
    Those friendly men who've come today
    In clean white coats to take me away!!!!!!!




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 17:45:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Too funny!!! Your the best girl with rhyme and meter. I feel the same way some times (smile)
    Thanks for caring and sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      Very funny poem. There is a sort of certainty as we read each sentence that it will end up with those gentlemen in white. You must be crazy to love all those things described in the poem. It was quite amusing, thank you for sharing!
    -Maria
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by AutumnLeaves | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe that was what happened to Dr. Suess.
    I liked the quirkyness of the poem and I do think that would be something like he would write.

    I thought about writing a country song about one of my jobs called " My Job Drove Me to Drinkin" I think it would sell. lol

    take care, Dax
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by dax | [ Reply to This ]
      haha I love. Since it is not yours, I can't really leave a critical comment.. lol

    Not that I would. Because this is really cute. And it made me laugh. Anything that makes me laugh deserves a good comment.



    thanks for sharing with us.

    samantha
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by slickviper097 | [ Reply to This ]
      :grin.

    Amusing. I liked it... it was funny.

    The only problems I see are a few spelling errors really. You might wantto edit. That's all the real comment I have for it, though.
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by DavidHirt | [ Reply to This ]


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