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    dots Submission Name: My Poetrydots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Poetrydots
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    straight from the heart thats all i know
    but what happens when the words dont flow
    i sit here for hours try to find
    that perfect word that will make it rhyme
    for all my poems are similar you see
    that one little thing makes them special to me
    for each little poem is crafted with love
    and read by the hearts of strangers
    i write my poetry to tell you this
    i love my life i would never end it like this




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 20:49:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      huh me too find it hard at times to write but I still sit there for hours thinking of the right words to say so others could relate to it or they feel like I do to me thats the beauty of poetry somebody outthere could relate, tyson
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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