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    dots Submission Name: I hate the way you...dots
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    Author: Priestess
    ASL Info:    21/female/usa
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 49/118/51
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Just a random love poem for my latest crush.


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    dotsI hate the way you...dots
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    I hate the way your so secure.
    I love your confidence
    I hate the way you make me blush.
    It doesn't make any sense

    I hate the way you talk to me.
    I love your recognition
    I hate the way you stand so close.
    O please don't change your position

    I hate the way you look so pure
    I love your beautiful face
    Your like a magnificent work of art.
    and there's nothing I would erase



    I say to your face I don't love you
    but deep in my heart I know I do




    Submitted on 2007-03-12 21:20:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. You really got inside a girl's head with this one. You hate to love him. I completely relate! Great write! I love the contridiction!!

    Ciao,

    }i{Renae}i{
    | Posted on 2007-05-07 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ]
      that is a good one! i like how it contradicts itself but make perfect sense! it was great!
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      cool writte I got into it reading it in my own way it was good should of wrote more I guess but then again I dont write that much either,
    tyson
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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