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    dots Submission Name: Whats the point?dots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhats the point?dots
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    What's the point in liveing
    if life is just a lie
    What's the point in careing
    when all you do is cry?
    What's the point in going on
    when you just want to die?....




    Submitted on 2007-03-13 12:19:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      once again, there are very few lines but the poem has a very clear, very emotional message...but now i'm feeling depressed. i think i'm going to go eat some chocolate...
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]


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