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    dots Submission Name: She wanted....dots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsShe wanted....dots
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    She wanted to know what love is
    so you showed it to her,
    She wanted to hide from heartbreak
    but you gave it to her,
    She never wanted the pain
    but you handed her the blade
    She never wanted to be numb
    but you took it all away.......




    Submitted on 2007-03-13 12:22:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sounds kinda like he picked you up then dropped you on your nose. I think everyone can relate to this, although I'm not sure that it's very original. But a girl's gotta write whats in her heart.
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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